I have taken all the comments my critique parner and my beta reader gave me and incorporated them into the manuscript. I’m now trying to finish the epilogue–usually my favorite part of a book when I’m reading. As happened with the rest of the book, I had to start over. I’d remembered that the Powers That Be at Ellora’s Cave frown upon babies and/or pregnancy in epilogues. They see them as cliche. I see them as fitting.